Jeff connerfeilds life hi,ive seen so many stories like that I feel left out so here goes. "JEEFERY ADIM CONNERFEILD" jeffs mum yelled "Get you behind down here right now!" as jeff walks down the stairs he sees a nerdy looking dude with a broken wrist by his mother "What do you want?" jeff said "Well this young man came over telling me you bait him up!" his mother said "Yeh he got meh good mrs. connerfeild" the nerd said "Uhhhh i remember" jeff said "your that dude that was kicking my little bro!" "well boys i'll let you sort it out" jeffs mother said. After a few hours of saying sorry to each other and listening to heavy metal the nerd disided to go home "So mr. tryhard punk rocker" a voice said "Oh sis get over it just because ive got tallent doesent mean YOU have to wreck it" jeff said,as a tall figer walks out of the shadows a nice looking teenage girl walks out(jeffs sister) "So JEFFERY are you gonna go play guitar today or are you gonna shater the windows with your IDIOCTIC music?" jeffs sister said. To be continued
.....At school the next day jeff saw his mate bradly "SUP" said jeff "yo" said bradly as they saw the p.e. coatch mr. meanie he souted "Eh you get here and do 100 pushups for being a *** in p.e." so bradly and jeff done the 100 pusups and then they found out they were late for class and also jeff wasnt good at school you could see from his appearance he has a black mowhawk and rocky clothes. After school jeff came in the door to see his girlfriend romactico "hey babe" jeff said "hey" romanctio said,then they made love. Sorry i cant think right now i'll post another soon tho
Hi, Simsyth, I've got a couple of questions. Are Jeff and Bradly in college? Do they have a band? What's Jeff's sister's name? Is Jeff's girlfriend named Romanctio or is that his nickname for her? It looks as if Jeff could get kicked out of school which would certainly put a damper on his career options. So I'm looking forward to Jeff and Bradly's adventures. Keep writing, the more little details about them, the better. By the way, it might be easier to compose your next chapter in the Windows Wordpad before you log on, then copy and paste here because the forum automatically logs you out after only a few minutes, something of nuisance.
Yes jeff and bradly are in collage his sisters name well i'll make up one for her and for some reson romantico is a nick name
After Jeff made love he wanted to ring up bradly so they could practice for there band called the "Shimmysims" bradly said he couldent though because something bad had happen in there circle of faith(there friend ship thing) so Jeff said "Yo whaaa? i'll be right over". As Jeff approached Bradlys door he saw a sign saying "Go to the galley J3ff" Jeff wonders why a three was there insted of a e and then he remembered bradly isnt any good at school either and proberly got the e around the wrong way. Jeff went to Sharp Thron galley where he saw Bradly with a few bigger guys than him "Hey bradly, who are these fullas eh?" said Jeff Bradly replyed "Get em boys" as the big guys walked up to jeff one of them pulled out a knife "What the hell!" jeff screamed "Get off me you (censored)ing ape" Then sudden pain! Jeff had been stabbed "why bradly, why" Jeff said weakly "I thought we were friends" "Jeff you know your girlfriend well she happens to be mine also and only one person can have her....AND THATS ME!!!" Bradly said. Jeff woke up about 5 days later in his room "W-w-what happened?" he asked "well you got stabbed and put in hostipal in sim city" a vioce replyed "stacy not now"(jeffs sister) jeff said. Jeff got up and then he saw what he didnt imagine...... To be continued....
I like the details, Simsyth. But we gotta stay away from the bad language. That's one of the rules on this forum. It's a good place to put up your storys, though, and to get answers to questions about the game. Looks like Jeff and Bradly live in a terribly dangerous neighborhood, worse than any other sim neighborhood around here. It also looks like they're enemies now. What about the nerd in the first chapter? Is he going to show up again?
The thing he saw that day shocked him, The nred and jeffs mum were woohooing "Wow guys! get a room" jeff said the nerd replyed "ehehehehe yeah thats it, hey hold on get outa here punk and we do have a room....your living room" jeffs mum fainted "ahhh what the hell man your killing my mum with diseases get outa here for eyes before i break your neck to!" jeff shouted "wow punk no need to go psycho" the for eyes nerd said just as he said that a car came through there wall "SUP GUYS" some stoned dude said "Wow this IS one crazy world" jeff said "uhh yeah sorry about your wall ay but umm as you can see im a bit well you know" the random stoned fulla said. a few days later jeff cought the bus to school as he sat down some freaky looking dude said "stop the bus or you all DIE" "hey you" jeff said "i'll deal with ya if you dont shut up!" just as he said that someing terrible happend, the freaky dude pulled a knife from his pocket and well threw it at jeffs neck sadly this was the end off jeffs life as it stoped him from breating. Jeff born in 1990 died in 2004. "Bye bye jeff" the freaky stoned nerd 2xer girlfriend and ex mate said then it was the end of there world and every one blew up. sorry for the ending like that but i cant think:hissyfit:
Sad story, Simsyth, and a mighty short little life for Jeff and his friends. I hope your other sims are happier.
Wow, that was really short and "un"-sweet. Entertaining though. I find it difficult to stick with one family and tell a story. So, I imagine, my story would have to be short. Though, I'm a sucker and don't like to see my sims suffer; so, it would have to end sweet.
Yeah,short life,though I dedicated it on my teenage sim the died. But he died in a different way lol. But i also made my story like that because i was bored:knockedout: lol
Thank you, the thing that helped me the most was the feed back so thnx so next time i can imporve my story telling
Don't beat yourself up. Writing is hard work and takes practice. It was a fascinating little story, if a little gory.
It's tricky. I make up my own swear words, because I have characters who would just naturally swear. So "sims" has become a substitute, just to keep things PG. And non-religious as well. At least the word "bloody" doesn't get censored.
well i listen to alotta swearing music like i was then and then i guess the word sliped in. the song was artist:Godsmack song name:I ****ing hate you liar i know bad name lol sorry i had to shear that.
I get the feeling, Simsyth, that in spite of wearing black and listening to a lot of swearing music, you have a hearty enjoyment of life and that's a good thing. I sincerely hope you can hang onto that outlook.
heh, yeh. but really you should hear the song its quite cool http://images.google.co.nz/images?q=tbn:evOavult8wIJ:babygurl958.tripod.com/sitebuildercontent/sitebuilderpictures/godsmack.jpg heres a lyrocs of ur intrested: For everything you do I'd like to swallow you And everyday I'm gonna blame you Even if you justify Every ****ing bull**** lie It only makes me want to break you You pull me down And you crucify my name You make me insane It's broken now Don't ever look my way Don't even think I'm playin' 'Cause I ****ing hate you You're such a liar And I love to hate you You're all the same to me When you repeatedly Take advantage of me The only thought I get of you sickens me Everybody knows you're fake You're everything I ****ing hate And I'm everything that you could never be You pull me down And you crucify my name You make me insane It's broken now Don't ever look my way Don't even think I'm playin' 'Cause I ****ing hate you You're such a liar And I love to hate you You're all the same to me I ****ing hate you You're such a liar And I love to hate you You're all the same to me (**** you) (**** you) (**** you) You pull me down And you crucify my name You make me insane It's broken now Don't ever look my way Don't even think I'm playin' 'Cause I ****ing hate you You're such a liar And I love to hate you You're all the same to me And I ****ing hate you You're such a liar And I love to hate you You're all the same to me **** you (**** you) **** you (**** you) **** you (**** you) **** you (**** you) Soz about swearing again...
